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Fizzing and bubbling,
Down with a slurp.
Don't drink it too quickly,
It might make you burp.

Drink it slow,
You know it won't last.
Savour the flavor,
It will be over too fast.
©2009-2010 ~riding-the-wind
:iconriding-the-wind:

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For dust8i8moth because she said I should make a poem about pop. So this is about pop-although the second stanza could pertain to life also I guess. It was going to be longer but this seemed to fit...

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:iconwhiteheartbluesky:
hahahahahah... wow...Sarah...
U R GOOOOOOD!!!!!!!! ^_^
u can even write about pop, POP!!!!
:icondust8i8moth:
yays!
*is content*

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Originals and prints for sale!
See my Journal Entry for details

"Hear the tolling of the bells--Iron bells! What a solemn thought their monody compels!"--E. A. Poe
:iconredphoenixfox1203:
i'm amazed you can specialize your topic like that. Whenever i try to stay on topic (ex: topic=love; i end up going off of all sorts of randomness and the only part about love will end up being scrapped!) Very impressed! Keep on writing!
:iconriding-the-wind:
Well that's why it's only two stanzas. I was going all over the place after that

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Of all the words of tongue and pen, the saddest are these: what might have been.

~*~I'd rather spend my life near the birds than wishing I could fly ~*~

~All I want is to be remembered when I'm gone, even if I'm constantly forgotten while I'm here~

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